bertozzi ([info]bertozzi) wrote in [info]act_i_vate,

The Voyage of the James Caird, re-do



Sometimes you eat the bear and sometimes, well...the bear eats you.

So I was drawing the next set of pages for the Shackleton story and I realized with horror that, though the pages were turning out ok, but I was no longer pushing myself--I was in a morass, a comfort zone, if you will. Concurrently, I been reading up a bunch of Krazy Kat and the more I read the more embarrassed I became about my own lack of imagination, or better said, my laziness in drawing forth my imagination.

So, taking inspiration from Herriman I have redrawn the first page of The Voyage of the James Caird. I hope you like!

Read the first version, or read the first story that I drew about the real-life adventurer, Sir Ernest Shackleton, PATIENCE CAMP.





You can click here to read up on Sir Ernest.

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[info]super_donkey

September 27 2006, 01:59:36 UTC 5 years ago

hey very nice!!

[info]bertozzi

September 27 2006, 03:01:08 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks, Z!

[info]man_size

September 27 2006, 05:30:25 UTC 5 years ago

I enjoy both solutions. Beautiful work.

[info]bertozzi

September 27 2006, 13:20:12 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks amigo!

[info]leborcham

September 27 2006, 14:50:00 UTC 5 years ago

The ink to the first version is broken! Please fix. Love this comic.

[info]bertozzi

September 28 2006, 04:28:06 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks for the eagle eye, H! And thanks for the kind words!

[info]iconotrast

September 27 2006, 16:32:56 UTC 5 years ago

This is more full of.. foreboding and feeling.
No sound effects though.

[info]bertozzi

September 28 2006, 04:30:15 UTC 5 years ago

Cripes! You are correct! I just re-read it and it seems wicked quiet. Perhaps I shall add :"ripple ripple" and "yaw yaw" for the deluxe ed.

Seriously, thanks for noticing that. I'm gonna ponder on it!

[info]abeguez

September 28 2006, 03:06:34 UTC 5 years ago

Looks greeeeeeeat! But how can you say you lack imagination... or rather that you are lazy at drawing forth your imagination! No way dude... no way.

[info]bertozzi

September 28 2006, 04:31:54 UTC 5 years ago

Thanks A! But I'm dead serious that I was geeling too complacent. It don't feel like art unless I'm taking a switch to my own behind!
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